i wrote this after reading a poem by enraptured_spider "my girlfriend" uhh this is like my reaction to it i suppose i think my poetry is getting progressively worse so im sorry everyone let me know when i get to the point i should stop posting my stuff |
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I let my weakness show
just befor you had to go it won't happen again from now till then watch the snow hit the ground till for you my emotions can be found you want to help to know my feelings though you know tis not appealing for that my heart is yours tis not you that keeps what i feel behinde closed doors I have fear that what troubles i may make you cry as I said befor tears you should shed no more if you still wonder why I was distraught I don't want what we have to rot peopel this close i ever push away that is what i was troubled by today I will always love you till the day i die if you were to leave I would surely cry |
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Such depth of emotion.
It not only accurately describes the situation but the reader can feel it too.
Please don't stop.
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Well I'd love to stay and chat, but you're a total bitch.
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Know your enemy.
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